Okay we’ll play the role of clear and succinct, we’m on some discomfort meds, so my thoughts are just a little not clear. Please forgive me ahead of time.
to start, i am unsure how you’re doing numbering for the releases or whatnot, but this 0.02 variation seemed very quick. Want it revealed down a few of that which you could do, nonetheless it did not obviously have any H content that i really could find. I possibly couldn’t also realize that image of the bath, is that when you look at the variation someplace? It absolutely was good showing down that which you could possibly do in the foreseeable future, but until we see more game and reveal exactly how your system works, i cannot see a lot of people supporting you. They will however, aren’t getting me personally incorrect. Your material listed here is good. I am just saying more individuals would help if there is more to utilize.
Secondly, your art appears decent, i love the type designs and backgrounds.
The writing seems significantly fine for now, nevertheless the objective when it comes to very first time is +10, you essentially need to be polite as heck and can not be dirty at all. Continue reading